Schematic presentation of a Lehane scene where prepositions are coded in blue, conjunctions in yellow, punctuation in red ( e.g., *paragraphs |||) and logical relation or juxtaposition coded in green. Clause branching with commas are indented forward. Illustrative line comments are in the right column.
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low sentence per paragraph example, high dialog tension- - Two simple introductory sentences situate place and time - - simple, sometimes 2 word dialogue fragments, set up a confrontation to come with players and emotional stakes, possible threats. Sparse but highly effective communication of future scene set up, tension prolonged. - - - - - - ---------------------- |