Scene Verbosity Outlier Table

Sorted by S/P

scene

note

Paragraphs

Sentences

words

S / P

W / P

W / S

02_01_01

Brendan character 2nd Act, 1st Chapter, introduction, no dialogue, introspection

11

58

1023

5.3

93

17.6

03_02_02

03_02_02 style

Dave sequel, introspection, no dialogue.

8

37

753

4.6

94.1

20.4

04_05_03

Killing of Ray Harris story to Dave in bar, reminiscence

112

477

5833

4.3

52.1

12.2

03_06_02

Sean, his father, multi-sentence dialogue only.

36

62

681

1.7

18.9

11

02_07_02

style 02_07_02

Short dialogue set up to confrontation (Sean with Jimmy, Katie in the woods)

25

36

334

1.4

13.4

9.28

02_01_06

Brendan dream (emotion)

3

3

56

1

18.7

18.7

02_10_03

Jimmy with Katie at the morgue (emotion)

9

9

134

1

14.9

14.9

Sorted by W / S

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Paragraphs

Sentences

words

S / P

W / P

W / S

02_05_01

Internal musings with description, Jimmy at communion

16

50

1380

3.1

86.3

27.6

02_02_01

Dave in the bar, internal no dialogue.

14

52

1320

3.7

94.3

25.4

02_08_01

Celeste, Dave's wife, internal musing, doubt over husband's guilt-innocence, internal

36

126

3101

3.5

86.1

24.6

01_01_03

Action, boy's dialogue, major plot point, Dave abduction

161

326

3462

2

21.5

10.6

04_03_02

Sean interrogates Brendan, major reveal, the gun.

89

187

1975

2.1

22.2

10.6

04_01_06

Major reveal, liquor store hold up

15

26

273

1.7

18.2

10.5

02_07_02

Confrontation set up, Sean, Jimmy, Woods, see above.

25

36

334

1.4

13.4

9.28

Sorted by Words

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Paragraphs

Sentences

words

S / P

W / P

W / S

04_05_03

Dave's killing, Dave in bar, major plot point, see above.

112

477

5833

4.3

52.1

12.2

03_04_02

Whitey and Sean interrogate Dave at Jimmy's house, sub-scene Celeste, turning point.

178

406

5518

2.3

31

13.6

02_06_01

Celeste internal musings, see above.

122

281

4712

2.3

38.6

16.8

03_07_01

Celeste-Dave conflict and internalizations, the Vampire, important backstory characterization

130

361

4690

2.8

36.1

13

03_06_01

Sean and his parents, character introductions

156

316

4475

2

28.7

14.2

02_02_02

Celeste and her mother, back story

117

304

4421

2.6

37.8

14.5

03_03_02

Event summary, Sean and Whitey and the police boss

110

290

3969

2.6

36.1

13.7

04_01_02

Jimmy dream Katie (emotion)

11

21

481

1.9

43.7

22.9

02_04_03

Major plot point, Katie's car found with blood.

17

31

381

1.8

22.4

12.3

04_05_02

Celeste in the motel breakdown

10

26

335

2.6

33.5

12.9

02_07_02

Sean, Jimmy woods, see above, set up.

25

36

334

1.4

13.4

9.28

03_07_02

Celeste wanting to run away (emotion).

9

16

297

1.8

33

18.6

04_01_06

Ray Harris gun, see above.

15

26

273

1.7

18.2

10.5

02_10_03

Jimmy, Katie morgue, see above.

9

9

134

1

14.9

14.9

02_01_06

Brendan dream, see above.

3

3

56

1

18.7

18.7