Structure of Mystic River to Inciting Incident

see also N02 - Structure

The right most columns indicate if a character is mentioned 1st or 2nd in frequency. This shows how Lehane shifts between main character viewpoints in each scene as the story progresses.

In this first third of the novel, we can see that each character is introduced in relation to family, and to where that family fits in a social milieu. Moreover, the character's personality differentiates his place in the milieu. Lehane invests a great deal of scenes in initial characterization, such that disturbances occur frequently, and then the characters are examined in sequel for their reaction to these disturbances. The reactions impact all of the characters in diverse ways, directly, or indirectly, and perceptions of events change consequently as the timeline moves forward from boyhood to later.

Sean's socio-economic separation from Jimmy and Dave is heightened by the major initial disturbance of Dave's abduction, as is his emotional remoteness from his wife Lauren. This leads Sean to a truncated self-searching for redemption from his guilt over the abduction, and a need to seek justice in his work as a police detective.

The 'stealing' of Dave becomes an act of power and violence that the powerless Jimmy learns to emulate, leading first to school expulsion, and prison, and then, later, retaliatory murder.

The abduction severs Dave's psyche into two halves, one a pretense of normality, and the other, the damaged boy held by the 'wolves', full of rage.

Lehane then allows each scene to change each character in their own ways, in relation to their primary internal struggle, and the result of these internal struggles, cascades through each character in consequence. And Lehane examines these consequences in strict relief relative to the background of the character's immediate social relations. What happens to Dave then will impact his wife and son, what happens to Jimmy will impact his wife and daughter, and so on, such that the emotional stakes become higher. In parallel, the family history generated defects lead to flaws in judgement along the way, with tragic, or redemptive consequences, as the story reaches its decisive battle.

word*

percent tot

scene

element

event

sean

Jimmy

Dave

Other

1377

1.0%

01_01_01

disturbance

Jimmy on the train tracks

1

1

600

1.4%

01_01_02

reaction

Father forbids Sean f. Jimmy, the flats

1

1

2927

3.4%

01_01_03

disturbance

Jimmy wants to steal car

disturbance

Jimmy Dave fight

Major Incident

Dave abduction

1

1

438

3.7%

01_01_04

reaction

Sean and Father, Police

1

1

689

4.2%

01_01_05

reaction

Jimmy and Father, Dave stolen

1

1

2642

6.0%

01_02_01

major Disturbance

Dave returns, block party, isolation

1

1

2829

8.0%

01_02_02

Reaction

Dave is freak in school, Jimmy expelled, Sean separate

1

1

865

8.6%

02_01_01

New characters, disturbance

Brendan Loves Katie, elope

1

520

9.0%

02_01_02

Shading

Jimmy, duaghter Katie is grown up, said good bye.

1

1253

9.9%

02_01_03

new character, shading

grown up Dave, Celeste, social milieu

1

433

10.2%

02_01_04

shading

Katie getting high w friend

1

1900

11.5%

02_01_05

disturbance, back story shading

Katie dancing on bar, back story Roman , ex bf Bobby

1

47

11.5%

02_01_06

emo shading

Brendan dreams of Katie

1

1116

12.3%

02_02_01

Synchronicity

Dave in bar w Katie

1

3738

14.9%

02_02_02

Major Disturbance

shading, Celeste and family, Dave comes home w blood, the mugger, Celeste w Dave's clothes

1

1982

16.3%

02_03_01

disturbance

Jimmy wakes up, Katie missing

1

2480

18.0%

02_03_02

shading

Jimmy, Brendan market

1

782

18.6%

02_04_01

new character, disturbance

Lauren, Sean's separated wife

1

1422

19.5%

02_04_02

shading

Brendan and Katie backstory

1

322

19.8%

02_04_03

Major Disturbance

911 call, Katie's car found

1

1

1

1557

20.9%

02_04_04

new character, investigation begins

Whitey Sean's boss, Katie car called in

1

1167

21.7%

02_05_01

new character, stakes, shading

Jimmy's wife Annabeth, daughter Nadine, communion, social milieu

1

1135

22.5%

02_05_02

disturbance

Sean in park looking for Katie

1

1976

23.8%

02_05_03

shading

Jimmy crime, Annabeth backstory

1

841

24.4%

02_05_04

disturbance, investigation path

Sean and blood in the park

1

810

25.0%

02_05_05

tension shading

Jimmy w Nadine, Annabeth sees police car

1

3984

27.8%

02_06_01

disturbance, fake ally

Celeste doubts about Dave's story

1

1620

28.9%

02_07_01

Disturbance

Deveau , Jimmy in park observing police, allies, sees its Katie's car

1

1

282

29.1%

02_07_02

reaction, disturbance 2 Sean

Whitey, Sean in park, Jimmy asking for him

1

1669

30.3%

02_07_03

tension climbing

Val Savage & Jimmy trying to get in park, Sean gets Troopers call

1

1

2622

32.1%

02_08_01

shading

Celeste doubts, cleans drain, no news of mugger, Katie on news

1

1027

32.8%

02_09_01

disturbance-reaction

Jimmy talks 2 wife, will go in park

1

2830

34.8%

02_09_02

Inciting Incident-Catalyst

Sean finds body, Jimmy breaks in, confronts Sean

1

1

2864

36.8%

02_10_01

reaction, stakes, beginning of who done it

coroner takes body, boss Friel pressure on Whitey and Sean, possible suspects

1

2122

38.2%

02_10_02

backstory, reaction

Jimmy in prison compared to waitinf for Katie, get in Sean's car

1

113

38.3%

02_10_03

emo

Jimmy identifies Katie w Sean in morgue

1

1

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For more, see N02 - Structure And N08 - Story